Now this is much better. As this is coming together, the composition is very strong. I worked with some gradients with the atmospheric perspective. It's looking very nice. I also have begun to separate the objects and their color values. It's going to take a bit of testing to find the colors and their intensity keeping the foreground strong, but yet not too strong. The foreground needs to be strong and vibrant, but the trick is to keep the foreground, middleground, and background working nicely with each other keeping a form of balance and enhance the story telling of the illustration. I'm looking forward to finishing this! But, there are many other things on my plate at the moment too that needs attention - such as school assignments, which means more heads and hands studies and storyboarding :) Looking forward to it!
The composition is definitely a lot better than your first. There are many things the viewer can look at without having their eyes wander out of the page. There is also a nice place where the eyes can rest (out in the distance where there isn't so much going on). Very nice.
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